Blog feedback and Learner response
WWW: You have made an excellent start to GCSE Media – well done! Your fruit bowl is fantastic – you’ve really captured the Autumn palette beautifully. Your blog is also fully up-to-date which is great to see and you’ve picked out some good aspects in the homework tasks so far. I like the level of detail you’re offering on mise-en-scene – particularly the first two paragraphs. Keep up the good work!
EBI: The key aspect to work on if we want to aim for the top grades is depth and detail throughout our written work – for example, the third paragraph for mise-en-scene. You also need to be careful you are writing about the meanings being communicated to the audience and not just describing what happens or telling the story (this is denotation rather than connotation).
The other area I would suggest working on is keeping an eye on your written English. Things like capital letters are important in written communication and getting them perfect in your blog is a great preparation for the later exams.
LR: Create a new blogpost on your Media blog called ‘Blog feedback and Learner Response’. Copy and paste this WWW/EBI feedback into your blogpost then complete the LR tasks/questions below.
Reflect on your first month of Media. What do you feel is your strongest piece of work so far? What is your weakest? What specific skills or knowledge do you need to develop over the rest of the course?
LR:
I think that my strongest piece of work is my Stranger Things mise-en-scene work.
I think that my weakest piece of work is my Doctor Who camera work.
Over the rest of the course I feel like I need to work on my analysis skills and just my skills on going in more depth with my answers.
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